The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that the

government

should finance committees that

controls

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wellness issues

instead

of spending

money

on

medicine

and

treatments

.

Although

I believe that the state investment

on

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early health issues

prevention

communities

have

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a significant role in human

life

. I think that

a

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proper funding

on

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for

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medicine

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stuff has a crucial

part

of its society. On the one hand, the

government

should definitely allocate a large

part

of its budget to

health

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problems

prevention

process.

This

economic sector determines the overall quality of

life

its

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citizens, because healthy people

important

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an important

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part

of the

country

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development

,

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if they do not

well

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do well

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that the country

face

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economical failure,

ensure

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that quality

of

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foods

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food

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are

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available to all

the

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citizen irrespective of their income and social status, that the

government

must enforce

law

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for food manufacturers. The reason is that trade

foods

has

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inappropriate ingredients.

As a result

,

over

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consumption

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the consumption

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these

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foods

people become sick,

therefore

, the

government

should establish rules and regulations for food manufacturing companies, that way can prevent unhealthy food enter to markets as well as it would help to reduce

medicine

consumers

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.

For instance

,

Mexico

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authority implement

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law

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for

prevention

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morbid

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foods

consumption

for

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children

On the other hand

, spending

money

on

medicine

and

treatments

is not a waste of

money

, it has an integral

part

of its society

,

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because

medicine

and

treatments

can utilize immediate disease, that way can give

life

for

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their lives. Especially major

disease

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diseases

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like mental illness, that

medicine

and

treatments

are compulsory for them, that way, the state should adequately finance

medicine

.

For example

,

counseling

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counselling

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have

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has

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capabilities

for

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to

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prevent

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preventing

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depression.

Hence

, meditation would aid to improve their healthy

life

. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, the authority should spend a large

part

of its budget on

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the diseases

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diseases

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disease

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prevention

process, I think spending

money

on

medicine

is

a

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vital

of

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its society.