The continued rise in the worlds population is the greatest problem faced by the humanity at the present time What are the causes of this continuous rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by the humanity?

The great increase in

the worlds number

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the world's number

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of

human's

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humans

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is the

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greatest

geatest

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greatest

issue presently.

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totally agree with

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opinion that

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continuous

continous

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the continous

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rise of the global

population

of

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human beings

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human-beings

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human beings

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is the greatest problem.

Firstly

, the main cause of the surging rate is

lack

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the lack

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of family planning.

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,

lack

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a lack

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of making futuristic plans towards the

numbers

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number

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of children you and

our

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your

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spouse desire can result

into

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over

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overpopulation

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population

.

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instance

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the main reason for the large

population

currently in china is a result of

lack

of family planning.

Thus

if family planning is not taught and encouraged it can result in the rising

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population

poulation

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population

of the world.

Secondly

,

lack

of education is interlinked with the growing

population

. When one is uneducated he/she is not aware of

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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of giving birth

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beyond

beyound

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beyond

your resources,

thus

giving birth

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has

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much as they like.

Also

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some believe

reprocating

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reciprocating

in a large quantity is a source of blessing, which is not.

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, women in under-developed countries in

africa

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believe

beleive

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believe

in reproducing 20

offsprings

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to make it out of poverty.

Thus

lack

of basic education is a significant cause of

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continuous

continous

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the continous

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rise in

population

. To conclude,

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strongly believe the steady increasing

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population

poulation

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population

of

human's

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humans

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is currently an issue

that is

caused by two main factors which are

lack

of family planning and education.