Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are some negative results on children

to

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use

computers

in

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a daily row.

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essay

totaly

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totally

agree

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with

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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of using

computers

steadily

go

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beyond

their

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advantages of bringing

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us.

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to

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, I will discuss mental and

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physical

physically

phsically

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physical

problems

that

caused

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are caused

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by

computers

.

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off, spending a lot of time on

computers

is

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can give rise to a series of mental effects

upon

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toddlers. Until they

invented

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, it is conspicuous fact that personal

computers

help us to deal with many issues that human beings can not surpass.

However

, if they not using under some restriction they can cause some psychological

problems

that children are insulted from their normal environments. I opine that the more using

computers

, the more unsocial life.

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one

of the

survey

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conducted by

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Oxford University claims that for children, it is far more

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

to

use

of

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computers

with

one

day gap.

Secondly

,

computers

are

the

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one

of the more substantial utensils in

the

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our modern life,

although

they can be led to

a great deal of

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health

problems

if they

use

frequently. Some ailments might be stemmed from using a computer. To exemplify,

the

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one

of

the

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my schoolmate's

child

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children

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is suffered from an eye disorder owing to

use

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a computer

more

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and more hours. He has played video games on his personal computer. To sum up,

computers

are stars in our technological era with overcoming many

hardship

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hardships

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using them.

Nevertheless

, there are many

problems

concerning the usage of

computers

day-by-day

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.