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In recent years, there has been a surge in the popularity of electric vehicles (EVs). What are the advantages and disadvantages of electric vehicles? Discuss and provide examples.

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 than those
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Structure
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Coherence
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Content
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Language
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Task Response
You've addressed both advantages and disadvantages of electric vehicles, which matches the essay topic.
Engagement
Your enthusiasm for the topic and the effort to consider both positives and negatives are evident.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • surge
  • popularity
  • electrical vehicles (EVs)
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • environmental benefits
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • air quality
  • cost-effectiveness
  • operational costs
  • maintenance costs
  • energy efficiency
  • non-renewable energy
  • battery issues
  • production
  • life span
  • disposal
  • limited range
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government incentives
  • tax rebates
  • grants
  • subsidies
  • technological advancements
  • innovation
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