Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is commonly assumed that transportation expenditure should be attributed to railways by

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constart

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constant

, other individuals

agrue

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argue

agree

that

road

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the road

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system

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is

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are

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much

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mush

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much

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more beneficial than

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rails

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rail

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. I extremely accept that both modes of

transports

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have good benefits. Rail networks have

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considerable merits for several reasons

can

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that can

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be clarified.

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with, the fundamental reason is that traffic is intensively congested

nowdays

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nowadays

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.Traffic jam is difficult to control in metro areas which

has

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resulted

by

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in

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a dramatic figure

of

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for

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vehicles.

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leads to high road accidents.

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,rail lines can carry huge tonnes of

cargeos

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cargoes

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and

hunderd

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hundreds

hundred

of passengers.

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,railway transportation

is relatively cause

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less

environment

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pollution.

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,cars emit intensive greenhouse gases ,like CO2.

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,

it

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effects

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affects

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negatively on earth's atmosphere which

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mainly causes global warming.

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, it is obvious that government have to make a budget for

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the rails

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rails

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system

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.

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,

i

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opine government can

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spend

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roads

system

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due to a number of reasons.

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,the major one is that some places contain swamps or rocky mountains.

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,in rural areas ,some people live

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bottom

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of

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valley

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or

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of

mountain

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.Due to that

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those areas cannot support with

rails

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. So,

subway

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the subway

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system

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is not an option.

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,vehicles have a better role in

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carrying

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carring

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carrying

individuals

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within

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within

different

of

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regions.

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,

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rails

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investment is unreasonably high which takes years for

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construction

contruction

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construction

and requires lots of materials and

labours

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.From an

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environmental

enviromental

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environmental

perspective,

rails

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travel long distances which needs a significant amount of

coals

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coal

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and

gasolines

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gasoline

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as fuels.

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,burning these fuels create air pollution.

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,clearly road networks are a good option for those people who live far away from the city. To sum up,there are clear benefits for both forms of

transpoatation

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transportation

.I would believe that investment can be allocated in order to solve that serious issue that

faced

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by many people.