Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's modern world, technology has become a big part of
the
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people's lives, especially, cell
phones
. While
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it is a topic of great discussion whether
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mobile
moblie
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mobile
phones
should be used only for personal
use
or for work I believe they play an important role in both these categories.
Phones
play a keystone role in our private lives as nowadays, it helps us to connect to our loved one in a matter of seconds through calls and even provides us with the
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privilege
privilage
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privilege
to talk face to face with someone who is
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thousands
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of
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away with features like video calling.
For instance
, my brother who is in Australia
facetimes
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facetime
home
wheneven
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whenever
when even
he misses us,
hence
, making
this
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Australia from India nearly negligible.
This
invention has brought us all closer. It is quite a known fact that mobiles were invented to save
our
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time and
the
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their
use
in the field of work has proved it right.
Although
, sometimes jobs
they
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can prove to be a distraction
but
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its
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advantages surely
overshadows
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this disadvantage
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as workers
use
them to send reminders for meetings,
tasks
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and tasks
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,
use
it
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them
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to make important calls, stay updated about their
surrounds
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and many more things. An example of
this
can be how
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a lot
alot
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a lot
of the
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work related
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announcements and messages are sent to the employees
in
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their
phones
. In some cases, the salary of employees is
also
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transferred
tranferred
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transferred
via their
phones
which is a
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convenient
convinient
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convenient
and safe method. To summarize, just like any other technological invention cells
also
have many cons but considering how big
its
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positive impact on our daily lives in terms
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both personal
use
and
job related
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job-related
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use
is I believe that they are an inseparable part of our modern society.
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