The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The restoration of old

buildings

in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of

money

.

This

money

would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays one of the widely discussed issues is that government should stop spending a significant amount of

money

on the restoration of ancient

buildings

.

Instead

, they ought to spend the

money

to build new homes and better roads. In my opinion, the government should pay more attention to replacing old and historical

buildings

since they play an important role to conserve culture and encourage

tourism

.

This

essay will examine both pros and cons of

this

controversial issue.

First

and foremost, there are a number of significant advantages of rebuilding old

buildings

and one of them is that

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ancient houses may be a treatment for society since their appearance looks outdated and

also

can be risky to the environment,

therefore

replacing these

buildings

we will be able to save the culture and the history of a country.

Moreover

, developing historical temples or old

buildings

helps to increase the certain country’s economy since they are considered one of the major factors and attractions of developing

tourism

.

For instance

, a number of countries have boosted their economy with the aid of

tourism

by just modernizing outdated

buildings

. Turning to the other side of the argument, despite the obvious benefits of

this

development, there are

also

some advantages of

this

.

Firstly

, the budget which the government is using to reconstruct the ancient

buildings

is

also

can be utilized for the purpose of building new modern houses or roads since well-constructed highways can bring wide access to the cities that have a tendency for traffic jams. To conclude having everything mentioned , I can come to the conclusion that renovation of old

buildings

may require an enormous amount of

money

,

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it is extremely beneficial as

this

will bring more

tourism

income.