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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastic to do environment? what can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #government #individuals
Several factors may be responsible for the
plastic
 crops
such
 as bags, bottles and packaging.
However
, there are a number of steps that can be taken to address them.
This
 development of utilizing has given rise to some
pollution
 problems, but
fortunately
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 there are ways to address these issues. One major problem concerning plastics
are
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 the ease with which
environment
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the environment
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 can gain potentially
pollution
.
For example
, molecular particles which
has
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 included within
of
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plastics are capable to damage
to
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the
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several elements of carbon, oxygen and nitrogen gas. In
this
case
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 the earth's surface and orbit are accessible to
destroy
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 by
pollution
. Another issue of concern is approximately wiping out
of
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the
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wild nature. It occurs as a consequence of
plastic
wastes
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can
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 become meddled in plants' roots when they have thrown as
a
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garbage
to
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landscape
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.
Thus
, it would become a reason
die
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 out of animals and
taking
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 a heavy toll on forests. To contract these problems, one possible solution would be for governments to suffer
atmospheric
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pollution
.
This
 can be done by reducing
of
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plastic
 bags and
another
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other
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such
as
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things' production and
using
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.
Furthermore
, the
defense
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 system of cattle and woods must be strengthened through authorities for suffering from dying out and deforestation.
Therefore
, there should be
action
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 and measures on landfills. To summarize,
although
plastic
 bottles, packaging and bags have numerous negative impacts on the environment and
beside
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other things, with some
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wider
riders
widers
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wider
 effort and training from people and the ruling of governments, the earth can be saved from
this
 harm.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • wildlife
  • marine life
  • decompose
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • waterways
  • flooding
  • soil
  • groundwater
  • government regulations
  • single-use plastics
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • plastic consumption
  • recycle
  • dispose of
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