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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is often argued that the authorities must support the universities to provide
education
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 free of cost for everyone,
that
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 would be led to
better
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a better
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 literacy rate in the country.
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, few folks believe that it would decrease the quality of
education
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.
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advantages
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 and disadvantages of both notions followed by a conclusion with my opine. On the one hand, free
education
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 increases the literacy rate in
country
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. To elaborate, some
of
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very
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 talented students could not get higher
education
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 only due to financial issues and start working after completion of their basic schooling.
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, a folk from
lower
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 income family has very good grades in 12th standard but due to
heavy
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the heavy
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 fees
of
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universities
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 he could not continue his
education
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.
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, if
its
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it's
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 free he will go for
higher
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a higher
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 degree.
In
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the
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 result, there will be a valuable increment in the asset of the country, and he may
server
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 better.
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, if all the institutions provide free
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coaching
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couching
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coaching
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than
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then
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 the competition will decrease. To explain, private universities tried very hard to produce good results for their popularity which led to
get
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 more admission in the coming years.
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, All the student wants to become
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part of NUST (National University of Science and Technology) because of its teaching standard despite
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its high fees.
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, NUST
produce
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 more quality worker for the market than any other varsity.
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, free
education
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 needs more government budget to run the system and to
fulfill
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 the requirement may
needed
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 to cut the share of any other public service sector. To conclude, free higher
education
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 inclines the literacy rate but same time it declines the quality. In my opinion, there should be an amalgamation of both modes of top-level
degree
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degrees
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