University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is often argued that the authorities must support the universities to provide
education
free of cost for everyone,
that
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would be led to
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literacy rate in the country.
However
, few folks believe that it would decrease the quality of
education
.
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and disadvantages of both notions followed by a conclusion with my opine. On the one hand, free
education
increases the literacy rate in
country
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. To elaborate, some
of
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very
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talented students could not get higher
education
only due to financial issues and start working after completion of their basic schooling.
For example
, a folk from
lower
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income family has very good grades in 12th standard but due to
heavy
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fees
of
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universities
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he could not continue his
education
.
However
, if
its
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free he will go for
higher
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degree.
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the
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result, there will be a valuable increment in the asset of the country, and he may
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better.
On the other hand
, if all the institutions provide free
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coaching
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couching
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coaching
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than
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the competition will decrease. To explain, private universities tried very hard to produce good results for their popularity which led to
get
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more admission in the coming years.
For instance
, All the student wants to become
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part of NUST (National University of Science and Technology) because of its teaching standard despite
of
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its high fees.
Therefore
, NUST
produce
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more quality worker for the market than any other varsity.
Moreover
, free
education
needs more government budget to run the system and to
fulfill
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the requirement may
needed
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to cut the share of any other public service sector. To conclude, free higher
education
inclines the literacy rate but same time it declines the quality. In my opinion, there should be an amalgamation of both modes of top-level
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.
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