In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays a lot of
countries
have good advances in agricultural sphere. But inspite this
, big amount of people
all over the world don't get enough level of food
. They go hungry, and it is a big problem
of our civilization. In this
essay will be examined the reasons why it is so, and ways to solve this
problem
.
In my opinion, the case of being some part of our humanity hungry causes by present politics and level of developing of each country
. We know that many countries
of African continentn have to survive, because they have not good economics, and budgets. At these countries
many people
can not find a job, and have to work hard to buy some food
, or to produce it. Another reason is the climate: if it is too hot, and almost no rains, it it hard to improve agriculture and grow fruits, vegetables and seeds in this
country
. Thats why food
is not enough: Goverments have no money to improve agriculture and to advance another different parts of incomes, such
as tourism, making goods on factories, import them - the citizens of that countries
have to stay hungry.
I think that to solve this
problem
we have two ways. On the one
hand, developed countries
, like USA. Canada, Australia and European countries
should write a programme for improving poor states of Africa and another poor countries
and help them to by finance, or by sending there good specialists. Another way is to lose independence of that countries
and becoming a part of developed states like Japan, South Korea and Singapore or China. I think the last
one
could make any poor country
to become a developed one
. On the other hand
, the second way of solving the problem
is to migrate a half part of people
of African country
to a developed state, and may be food
and products should be enough for the rest half.
In conclusion, there are a lot of different problems in the world. And we examined one
of them at this
essay. In spite of advances in developed countries
, we still have hungry people
, who can not find food
and some of them even die. It is awful situation, and I hope that Governments of leader states should try to solve it in nearest 10 years.Submitted by Allazhar on
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Task Achievement: The essay does not fully address the task. It focuses on the problems but lacks a thorough exploration of the reasons and solutions for the issue of hunger. It is important to address all aspects of the prompt in a balanced manner.
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