Living in a a country where you have to speak foreign Language can cause serious social. problems, as well as practical problems. To What extent do you agree or disagree.

It is true that
people
living in a nation where they ought to
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with foreign
people
only
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their own
language
, and
this
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some kind of serious issues like social and practical. I partially agree
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this
view and think that living in
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of
foreign
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a foreign
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country may cause
a little
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a little problem
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problems
. On the one hand,
people
who are living in abroad, have some
problems
like social or practical. Because, if
people
live in
overseas
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country after, certainly they would have  some
language
barrier while they are talking with foreign
people
and
this
might be
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problem.
For instance
, the famous person Jim Carly had some social
problems
, when he went  
to
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abroad for
interview
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an interview
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, because he was not able to speak clearly and very well, particularly when he was among the myriad
number of
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audience.
Therefore
,
this
kind of condition makes some serious social
problems
,
as a result
of their poor speaking skills.
On the other hand
, speaking only
foreign
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language
might be better for some
people
duration of their life.
In other words
, if humans speak only
foreign
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language
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after they would be good
speaker
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speakers
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,
and
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all of her or
his
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social or practical
problems
might
be
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disappear.
For example
, my uncle has been living in England, and duration  of years he was able to change his
language
skill to the right ones, and his social and practical
problems
was reduce
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.
Thus
,
people
should live in
other country
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other countries
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in order to decrease
the
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social
problems
. To conclude, I believe that talking with
people
only foreign
language
cause some problem
like
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social or practical, but it may help to decrease these types of problem on the other side.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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