Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that protecting wild
animals
and birds is a waste of time and money.
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completely disagree with
this
point of view. Many current practices involving the use of
animals
illustrate that governments have not invested enough time in the issue of animal welfare.
For example
, lawmakers have banned the use of wild and exotic
animals
for
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purposes, yet wild
animals
are still kept in captivity for circuses.
This
inconsistency between law-making and law enforcement suggests that the issue is not being taken seriously enough by those in power.
Furthermore
, it seems that an
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approach is unlikely to change people’s awareness of the issue. For many years, people have underestimated the role of wild
animals
, and many today still hold a belief that wild animal products have exceptional powers. To re-educate
such
people requires patience and consistency.
In addition
to
this
, resources spent on wildlife protection are still limited. Many authorities believe that wild animal and bird conservation is only of minor importance, and human welfare is far more of a priority.
This
is why governments are not willing to allocate large amounts of funds and resources to the conservation of wild
animals
, which makes it difficult for organisations that are actually trying to make a difference.
For instance
, in Vietnam, we do not see any long-lasting bird conservation campaigns
due to
a lack of funding from the government, and it is
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organization that currently raises the funds to take care of existing wild birds. In conclusion,
while
there are some time and
resource
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spent on wild animal and bird protection,
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believe that far more
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are needed to achieve that ultimate goal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Biodiversity
  • Intrinsic value
  • Ecological balance
  • Conservation efforts
  • Endangered species
  • Sustainable resource management
  • Habitat preservation
  • Eco-tourism
  • Job creation
  • Ethical considerations
  • Allocated resources
  • Poverty alleviation
  • Educational initiatives
  • Future generations
  • Wildlife protection
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