Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with
Hello Kiran,
Hope you are doing well, get to know each other
i
am writing Change the capitalization
I
this
letter to let you know, that i
am not able to join you for the movie that we planned a month ago. Change the capitalization
I
Although
i
had already Change the capitalization
I
mention
to my employer about Change the verb form
mentioned
this
event even that day he approved my leave. Ufortunately
, Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
however
, my one of colleague
got sick which is why my boss cancelled my leave for that day.
So, Fix the agreement mistake
colleagues
i
decided to attend the meeting on that day but Change the capitalization
I
i
asked to Change the capitalization
I
manisha
to join you for the movie and guess what ? She said "Change the capitalization
Manisha
yes
".
I know you Capitalize word
Yes
were
Verb problem
have
liking
her since school times so it is Wrong verb form
liked
good
opportunity for both of youAdd an article
a good
Fix the infinitive
to
more
andRephrase
better
i
Change the capitalization
I
also
booked the
dinner for both of you at the famous restaurant which is located Correct article usage
apply
at
near the cinema. sorry about Change preposition
apply
this
inconvenience, but i
will Change the capitalization
I
definately
join you next weekend for your birthday party.
Hope you both will Correct your spelling
definitely
enjoy
.
Thank you
Your lovely AmarCorrect pronoun usage
enjoy it
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter. At times, the tone fluctuates between informal and formal.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single idea to improve readability and clarity.
complete response
Consider revising certain phrases for clearer expression and fixing minor grammatical errors.
complete response
You have successfully included the key points required for the task, which makes the purpose of the letter clear.
greeting and closing
You have a friendly and warm greeting and closing which contributes well to the overall tone of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,