Nowadays many animals are about to disappear from the earth forever. What are the causes and some solutions for this?

Both human and natural factors seriously contribute to the disappearance of most

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

animals

Add an article

the animals

show examples

today. The majority of people currently have a tendency to hunt rare

animals

illegally. After

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

successful hunting, they will divide the

animals

’

body

Fix the agreement mistake

bodies

show examples

into many separate parts

such

as heads, horns, tusks, skins,

bones

Correct word choice

and bones

show examples

and sell them to other people to earn money. Because everyone usually believes in nonsense and unreliable

rumors

Change the spelling

rumours

show examples

spreading from individuals or organizations who are not really experts

about

Change preposition

in

show examples

biology, they imitate those undependable

informations

Change the wording

information

pieces of information

show examples

in using

animals

for a certain purpose.

For example

, people frequently use Rhino horns and Tiger bones as a treatment or

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

medicine.

Besides

, other parts of those

animals

are used in decoration and

jewelry

Change the spelling

jewellery

show examples

or packaged as souvenirs.

In addition

, deforestation and pollution destroy

habitats

Correct article usage

the habitats

show examples

of many

animals

.

For instance

, there were thousands of deforestation occur annually on Earth, so plenty of

animals

’ habitats in forests were gravely devasted.

Moreover

,

emission

Correct article usage

the emission

show examples

of smoke from factories, oil spill, and waste disposal into the sea even lead to

migration

Correct article usage

the migration

show examples

of birds and

death

Correct article usage

the death

show examples

of aquatic creatures. Natural causes cannot but take responsibility for

this

problem. Most

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

animals

Add an article

the animals

show examples

have been affected by natural disasters as well as climate change since the Earth has been becoming hotter. Due to global warming,

bushfire

Fix the agreement mistake

bushfires

show examples

took place in many areas all over the world, and it caused abundant consequences for most

species

. To tackle the problem, governments have to not only induce more new laws

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

but

also

re-enforce the current laws in protecting the threatened

species

by promulgating heavier punishments.

Beside

Replace the word

Besides

show examples

that, they need to care about building wildlife reserves like National

Park

Fix the agreement mistake

Parks

show examples

so that we can feed and bring up rare

species

. Raising

citizen’s

Fix the agreement mistake

citizens’

show examples

awareness

by

Change preposition

through

show examples

propaganda campaigns or establishing a subject to teach the children is a really effective method.

On the other hand

, private organizations can join hands to carry out breedings programs in order to increase the number of valuable

animals

species