Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. Do you agree or disagree?

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To begin
with,there are various levels of crime in
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society ranging from moderate to high according to the law.To elucidate,murder,rape and burglary are considered serious crimes in
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society.I agree that these offenders should spend their time in prison.
However
,traffic violations, and littering in public places are classified as moderate crimes and should be engaged to do unpaid work.In most cases,defaulters are booked for their offences and spend their time in confinement.
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,most of them have not learned a lesson from their term in prison or willing to accept their mistakes.The only option to get them to realise their mistakes is to engage them in some community work.
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,There is a shortage of individuals doing charity
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For example
,In orphanages there is a lack of resources to take of children and fulfilling their needs,
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in old age ,homes senior citizens need physical support and some assistance doing their chores.
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,in ,hospitals there are a plethora of patients who need assistance.Law enforcement must engage
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culprit involved in any of
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voluntary industry to compensate for their term in jail.
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,they should be involved in cleaning the public parks,regulating the traffic signals,moping the public hospitals and assisting the front-line workers in case of any emergency.Not only
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they will not repeat the mistakes again they will
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gain some experience to be a responsible citizen. To conclude,it is a better option to engage the offenders to do some community work rather than putting them behind the bars,
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