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• It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is beer in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 think that living in an urban
area
 is better than living in a rural
area
. I partly agree with
this
.
This
 essay will explain how are the differences between both sides of these.
Firstly
, I will give information about the advantages of living in an urban
area
. There are many reasons for living with the facilities downtown
such
 as the transportation, environment, or the opportunity for jobs. From my perspective, I live in Bangkok which is the capital of Thailand.
This
 will let you get opportunities from the resource that providing by the government. It's not only for the
people
 in there but
also
 they can get transportation easily, having some place for exercise and jobs to gain money.
In contrast
, There are many things that can be disadvantaged.
for instance
, They live in cities with overcrowded
people
 which is part of the problem
such
 as pollution, and access to services.
However
,
This
 will let
people
 struggle of living in the urban
area
.
Secondly
, I will give reasons for the advantages of living in a rural
area
. It's obvious that when we are living in a rural
area
 we have places for doing activities ,especially family activities. My hometown is Nongkhai which is between the Thai-Laos border, and the Mekong river. I liked fishing with my father which is the best activity for us, resulting in the bonding and attachment of the family.
On the other hand
, there is some restriction in
rural
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area
such
 as the health care system being developed which mean we can get access the hospital harder than in urban
area
. In conclusion, I believe that the difference between urban and rural areas depends on what your lifestyle needs.
Also
, I can choose the right way for me to live appropriately by the clear decision as aforementioned.
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