With the growing development of the medical industry, thankfully, humans can have much longer life expectancies than in the past.
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at 65 years old seems a standard in most countries, I agree that certain types of jobs must retire earlier than others. In Use synonyms
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of all, I believe that any occupation related to serving countries should get a pension early. To illustrate, working as a soldier in the military, a police officer and a firefighter consistently require one to dedicate one's life. Not only their lives are in danger all the timeLinking Words
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, surely, their devotion and commitments are inspiring enough to deserve better Linking Words
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, I insist that certain occupations related to sports or physical activities must get early Linking Words
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, national athletes and sports stars bring great victory, fame and entertainment to the nation. Of course, their hardship going through training has to be highly valued. Linking Words
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, In comparison with other jobs, sportsmen always use their physical strength to earn money and they are more likely to get injured by unexpected accidents, Linking Words
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, they should retire earlier than others.
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benefit, I believe national heroes who risk their lives for the country's safety and who contribute to bringing great fame to the nation are the most eligible to receive the benefits.Linking Words