Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The
music
market
is increasingly popular and has a great influence on people
, especially young people
. Besides
, there are many mixed opinions, some people
think that music
has a bad influence on young people
, but there are many people
who do not think so. I personally think that music
brings many positive things to young people
.
First
of all, the current music
trend is increasingly diverse such
as hip-hop, jazz, rap,etc. Young music
trends prefer songs
that are vibrant and cheerful, not like the music
of the next
generation. before. However
, there are some songs
that use inappropriate language or MVs with images that are not suitable for all audiences. Or that plagiarizing songs
and editing them to make their own songs
will also
have a lot of negative effects on listeners. This
will adversely affect the music
market
of the country
as well as the young people
.
On the other hand
, the music
industry brings a lot of value to young people
as well as the face of a country
. Music
is one of the methods to help people
easily express their feelings, and convey the emotions of the singer to the listener. It makes it easier for people
to get closer to each other. Besides
, when a song can reach the international market
and be accepted by many people
, it will also
help promote the image and traditions of that country
to international friends. For example
, Korea is known as a country
of idols, which has produced generations of influential idols. They are not only bringing their country
's music
to the international market
, but they are also
representing a country
in the arts. Young people
are not only influenced by K-pop music
but they are also
influenced by the style of idols' clothes.
In conclusion, besides
the obscene issues of music
such
as plagiarism or inappropriate language, the value of music
brings more benefits to young people
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