Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The
music
market
is increasingly popular and has a great influence on
people
, especially young
people
.
Besides
, there are many mixed opinions, some
people
think that
music
has a bad influence on young
people
, but there are many
people
who do not think so. I personally think that
music
brings many positive things to young
people
.
First
of all, the current
music
trend is increasingly diverse
such
as hip-hop, jazz, rap,etc. Young
music
trends prefer
songs
that are vibrant and cheerful, not like the
music
of the
next
generation. before.
However
, there are some
songs
that use inappropriate language or MVs with images that are not suitable for all audiences. Or that plagiarizing
songs
and editing them to make their own
songs
will
also
have a lot of negative effects on listeners.
This
will adversely affect the
music
market
of the
country
as well as the young
people
.
On the other hand
, the
music
industry brings a lot of value to young
people
as well as the face of a
country
.
Music
is one of the methods to help
people
easily express their feelings, and convey the emotions of the singer to the listener. It makes it easier for
people
to get closer to each other.
Besides
, when a song can reach the international
market
and be accepted by many
people
, it will
also
help promote the image and traditions of that
country
to international friends.
For example
, Korea is known as a
country
of idols, which has produced generations of influential idols. They are not only bringing their
country
's
music
to the international
market
, but they are
also
representing a
country
in the arts. Young
people
are not only influenced by K-pop
music
but they are
also
influenced by the style of idols' clothes. In conclusion,
besides
the obscene issues of
music
such
as plagiarism or inappropriate language, the value of
music
brings more benefits to young
people
.
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  • lifestyles and behaviours
  • glorify
  • distract
  • academic performance
  • self-expression
  • identity formation
  • source of inspiration
  • social and political messages
  • amplifying
  • accessible
  • influential
  • parental and educational guidance
  • critically analyze
  • responsible consumption
  • mitigate
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