Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays travelling abroad has become increasingly popular among people.

While some

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argue that regulations should be implemented in order to reduce

such

travel because the growing tendency of international trips will lead to environmental

damages

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. I totally agree with

this

idea.

To begin

with, travelling to

other country

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another country

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, including international transportation and the

carbon

footprint in the

traveling

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travelling

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country, would affect the

environment

negatively.

First,

travel by air leads to the accumulation of harmful exhaust fumes from

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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.

Such

fumes,

contain

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a high proportion of

carbon

dioxide, will undoubtedly exacerbate the hothouse effect, which will result in extreme weather conditions.

Second,

the

carbon

footprint of the accumulations of travelers is another major concern

regard

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to

environment

. In fact, after arriving at the destination, travelers tend to purchase many local products and in

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producing

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many

carbon

-based wastes

such

as plastic bags or packages.

Not to mention

that

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fact that they would

also

take taxis or other in-city transportation which will

also

lead to exhausted fume emission and raise the level of

carbon

dioxide in the atmosphere. All of these factors are not

environmental-friendly

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.

In addition

, I

also

advocate that authorities should take

actions

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to control the prevalence of international

traveling

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travelling

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. Nowadays, it is getting increasingly easier for people to visit other countries, as the flight price is cheaper and the procedures for crossing abroad

are become

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simpler.

This

trend contributes to the increasing number of international travelers, and in

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would lead to the acceleration of

environmental

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the environmental

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effects mentioned above.

Therefore

, the government should take

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responsibility for protecting the

environment

by introducing some regulations

such

as taxing

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international flights or shipping. In

this

way, the pollution made by international trips would be considerably reduced. in conclusion, visiting other countries will more or less impair the

environment

.

Therefore

, it is totally necessary and reasonable for the government to restrict

this

trend in order to make our world better.