Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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technology
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an easy way, whereas the other half of mankind Change preposition
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disagree
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However
in my opinion today
internet
has changed the retail and shopping industry to a vast area and Correct article usage
the internet
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on
the
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people
. The below mentioned
essay will point out both of the views and my opinion.
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To begin
with, there are plethora
of advantages of innovative Add an article
a plethora
technology
that we are using in our daily life. Firstly
, one of these advantages begins with online shopping, which is convenient and reliable to
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their work-life and home activities. Change preposition
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, this
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saves
lots of energy of Correct subject-verb agreement
save
people
, where in the past our parents had to keep a separate day for shopping all
the groceries, but with the technological development around us Change preposition
for all
by
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with
few
clicks our online shopping cart can be filled and the items are delivered to our doorstep. Another factor that most Correct article usage
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of
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the
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people
agree with the latest shopping technology
is convenience, internet shopping never has a closing or opening hours like as
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in-store
in store
shopping, Add a hyphen
in-store
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whenever
when ever
you want and where ever you are around the country you can order through different social platforms. As an example I live in Australia, due to the pandemic situations my parents are facing Correct your spelling
whenever
today
, they are unable to shop Add a hyphen
in-store
in store
and they are not familiar with the internet, so I order Add a hyphen
in-store
them
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their
grocery
through a Sir Lankan online store, which saves their time and my time as well.
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groceries
On the other hand
, the other half of people
who disagree with modern technology
which has affected the
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,
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today
people
are not socially interacting with each other, as an example
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people
around the village, town because they were interacting people
and they meet each other once a week while their
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for
instore
shopping, where they walk miles and miles selecting different vegetables and fruits etc. Since Correct your spelling
in-store
today
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today's
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part of shopping in stores, they have faced a lot of deceases Correct article usage
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such
as high blood pressure and obesity.
To sum up, in my opinion
online shopping using Add the comma(s)
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internet
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life saving
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life-saving
people
are using nowadays,
since the world is running towards money and every item in the market is Remove the comma
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skyrocketing
sky rocketing
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skyrocketing
people
need to work and earn to live. So leaving a particular day or few hours for shopping in the market is waste of time as well and
energy, these two options can be used to earn a sum and Correct word choice
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