You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you well and good in health. I am writing

this

letter to express my feeling after visiting your home. The most interesting thing in your flat which attracts me a lot is the interior and exterior design of your flat. All the rooms were long and spacious and the living room is a great place to spend time with family members. The time I spent with your grandparents gave me a great opportunity to learn about your traditions and cultures. Even they taught me many crucial skills in life and I am feeling grateful after getting knowledge from them. There were the most enjoyable hours for me in your home. I would like to invite you

month to my home on the occasion of my younger brother's birthday. We plan to celebrate it in our house. I hope

this

will become a memorable time for us. I will send you my residence location on your phone so that you can reach me easily. See you soon Yours lovingly

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

176 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding about the history of the house or building the live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

some people say that a person's success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents .Do you agree or disagree?

Some think that government should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion