You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you well and good in health. I am writing

this

letter to express my feeling after visiting your home. The most interesting thing in your flat which attracts me a lot is the interior and exterior design of your flat. All the rooms were long and spacious and the living room is a great place to spend time with family members. The time I spent with your grandparents gave me a great opportunity to learn about your traditions and cultures. Even they taught me many crucial skills in life and I am feeling grateful after getting knowledge from them. There were the most enjoyable hours for me in your home. I would like to invite you

month to my home on the occasion of my younger brother's birthday. We plan to celebrate it in our house. I hope

this

will become a memorable time for us. I will send you my residence location on your phone so that you can reach me easily. See you soon Yours lovingly

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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