Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

For centuries, absolute honesty has been a moral dilemma among people.
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some argue that there are occasions when a falsehood is necessary, others oppose
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and say that telling lies is a sin no matter what the reason is. I completely agree with the idea that occasional dishonesty can be beneficial, both for loved ones and society.
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with, the morality of a lie often depends on an individual's intention. People sometimes rely on white lies with good intent, whether to uplift a friend, make their mother happy, or encourage a younger sibling to study.
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, individuals may not want to hear the truth, especially cruel truths, which can lead to a loss of confidence and even self-isolation, and in some extreme cases, feelings of loneliness and depression.
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, when my friend bought an expensive dress, which she had been saving for months to afford, I told her it was really beautiful, and that made her extremely happy.
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, in a political context, telling deceitful statements is sometimes considered strategic.
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, some intellectual politicians avoid being fully honest after a careful assessment of the situation.
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often happens when dealing with hostile nations
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in order to protect national interests and prevent international conflict.
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, in the aftermath of the Arab Spring, some politicians had to lie in order to resolve conflicts and negotiate peace for the benefit of their citizens,
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soothing dangerous tensions. In conclusion,
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lying on purpose can sometimes have harmful consequences, I believe that occasional dishonesty is a useful tool to protect the people around us.

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Make sure to explain your points in more detail for better clarity.
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Try to use more linking words to make connections between ideas clearer.
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Add more examples to support each main point you make.
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Your introduction clearly states your position, which is excellent!
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You used relevant examples, which help to make your argument stronger.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your main points, showing good closure.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • essential
  • necessary
  • wrong
  • truth
  • lies
  • consequences
  • integrity
  • ethics
  • justifiable
  • compelling
  • deception
  • trustworthy
  • honesty
  • transparency
  • dilemma
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