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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and tam working skills are more important. Discuss both the sides.

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People have different perspectives
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the school
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school
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schools
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 should teach
children
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 to compete or work in
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 as a
team
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. While some people think that
school
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 should focus more on competitive
skills
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,
others
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 believe that it is better for
children
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 to learn to cooperate and work in
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group
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a group
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.
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 with,
children
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 who compete against
others
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 often do well in
school
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, said
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 some.
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, competition among
children
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motivate
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 them and
encourage
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encourages
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 them to perform better than their counterparts.
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, competition is considered to be the most highly regarded skill around the world as in the real world these
children
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 tend to compete for a job in the job market and success is entirely
depended
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 on how they outclass their competitors.
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, a study conducted by the University of Sydney in 2009 concluded that if there is any prize for a winner in any competition
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 they gave their 100% to win that prize.
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,
this
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 makes
the
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competitive skill even more important.
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, it is
also
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 of immense importance that
children
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 should learn to cooperate and work in
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team
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a team
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 as one. As most of the
time
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 these
children
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 might indulge in activities that could only be achieved via
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word
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work
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.
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, schools prepare
children
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 for their future and
industry
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the industry
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value
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values
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this
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these
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skills
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 as key
skills
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 for meeting goals and deadlines.
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, most organisations have multiple staff and without each
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others
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,others
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 support organisations might suffer in their smooth operation. Just like a cricket
team
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, where individual performances are useless if other
team
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 members do not perform. In conclusion, many people consider that competitive
skills
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 should be taught in
school
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, whereas,
others
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 think that cooperative and
group
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skills
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 should be given more preference.
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