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your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. he would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your friend. in your email -describe where you lived when you were a student at the iniversity -recommend the best way for him to look for accomodation -warn him of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

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Dear Sam I hope you are doing well and
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 letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you with regard to your requirement for some pieces of advice about looking for somewhere to live which will be comfortable and suitable.
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, I used to be a student there about five years ago, some things have changed there without any doubt but you will find my recommendations helpful. I had been living in a private dormitory in my
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 year until I moved to the state campus in my
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 year to the fourth year
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, I had good conditions in that private pension. The university resident hall was a high-rise block which contains many large rooms on every floor and plenty of facilities ,especially in its public kitchen like a microwave, dishwasher and even washing machine.
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, I found the
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 place to live through a representative of a famous state agent of that city who was confirmed by the university.
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, as technology keep processing, it enables you to find any rental place online and lots of websites provide you with plenty of beneficial and related information.
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, please be aware of where you choose to be near to the university because of the inappropriate public transport there which causes a delay in arriving on time to your class. Considering all the above, it is better to find and share your rental place with someone who is your classmate seeing that it leads to fewer conflicts. Warm Regards, Saeed Amini
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