Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and what solutions can be suggested? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
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about
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the
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teenagers
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in
crime
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a crime
the crime
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Today
increased
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teenagers
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drugs
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families under 18 ages boys do Add a hyphen
lower-income
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means,
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a teenager
teenager
family can not full fill their demand Replace the word
teenage
this
time college
boys go to do Add an article
the crime
crime
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crimes
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the Mirpur
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place is living poor people extremely. Moreover
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the parents
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parents'
parent's
children
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children's
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today's
today
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today's
generation
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uses
in
online they meet new people every day. Change preposition
apply
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lack
leack
of knowledge Correct your spelling
lack
parents
can not check with whom his
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their
children
are talking. As Correct your spelling
a
as
result, young engage with bad Correct your spelling
a
peoples
do crimes.
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people
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, Scool, Correct word choice
and college
college
can solve young demand. Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
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Schools
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and college
college
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colleges
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a job
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jobs
his
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their
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school
college
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jobs
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this
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these
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countries
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, such
as America. Furthermore
, Parents
need to restrictions on
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apply
his
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their
children
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children's
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using
useing
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using
internet
. Correct article usage
the internet
This
mean, Parents
should always monitor. When their children
will use internet
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the internet
parents
should seats near his
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their
children
.
In conclusion, Poverty and generation
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the generation
children
with his family Change preposition
of children
is
reason to do Change the verb form
are
crime
young generation
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apply
school
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schools
college
and Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
parents
can solve this
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