Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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the

economy

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manages the agrarian ,

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, others think that, not only the

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but

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other

progress

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as the health system, educational system and so on. In

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following essay, I will discuss opinions and highlight the conclusion. On the one hand, most

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governments put

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economic

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the top list due to many reasons. The

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and foremost motive is that

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wage

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can be everything, without it bucolic can not develop, because bill helps to improve

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value.

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,

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think that

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cash, namely,

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economy

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is everything.

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, in

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Afghanistan, a large number of

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are starving and they need

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to buy something to eat. If

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country

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the country

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had got enough capital , that homey would develop as well.

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, folk argue that

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not only the

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but

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other

progress

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are necessary

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the politics of

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the country

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the country

. The most urgent cause is that, without a health system and

scholarship

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, the

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will lose its value among other countries. To be clear,

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recession is reached in the

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place via improvement, and

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healthy

nation

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are able to forge that

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. What I mean by

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though, payment is everything,it can not give us our energy and if

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were not educated,

property

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would not be put in the top place.

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, the USA is

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rustic, cause of

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, the organizations of that agrarian concentrate on every

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, like strength, scholarship, building, design and etc. To sum up, it is disputed that providence is more important in the development period rather than others,

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,

another group

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of society think differently. From my point of view, other signs of

progress

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of the

country

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must be equally important as the

economy

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, because wealth can not bring well-being and teaching to evolve the bucolic.