Many young people travel to different countries. DO you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for them?

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present day

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young

community

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communities

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tend to travel to many areas

such

as Italy,

USAand

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USA and

Canada, etc.

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to the past time , now it is much easy and

affordable

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more affordable

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to see USA alive rather than watching

on

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TV which was common previously.

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essay will explore the

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advantages

adavantages

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advantages

of

traveling

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travelling

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by young human beings

with

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by

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outlining examples and reasons.

Firstly

,

traveling

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travelling

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abroad to varied places is beneficial for youth since it enhances their

oulook

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outlook

such

as enhancing their overview for new opportunities and

skills

.

For instance

, individuals by exposing to new culture and society can work in international companies which have

high - paid

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high-paid

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jobs with proper salaries.

In addition

, travelling to various foreign locations will improve

language

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the language

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skills

of youth.

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, they can gradually

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be used

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to a local language which citizens of

place

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the place

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which they are

vsisiting

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visiting

speak.

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improves

listening

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the listening

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and speaking abilities of young

people

. So, it will definitely

provides

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them

opportunity

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the opportunity

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for

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to

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studyiing

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studying

abroad and obtaining

education

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an education

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with

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of

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a

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good quality.

Thus

, upgrading their perspectives and

improvement

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improving

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of language

skills

which can lead to studying needed degree abroad are perfect advantages of travelling to various locations.

Secondly

, trips to different places will make

people

to

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apply

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be reach

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in terms of knowledge, experience and

multiside

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multisite

.

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, the young generation

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to outdated parents are more confident and open-minded since they have seen a lot while visiting various countries.

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,

young

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the young

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population

comparing

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to our ancestors are more brave and confident and not afraid of new challenges and obstacles.

This

is because communication with different cultures and nations gives

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youngsters chances for going to their dreams and getting high

achevements

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achievements

achievement

without any

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hesitation

hesistation

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hesitation

comparing

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to our old society

who

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didn't

used

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use

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to have chances to travel.

In addition

, our parents used to live in

closed

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a closed

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community

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communities

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where rare

people

could go abroad,

this

was a reason why our

mom

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moms

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and dads are more irrelevant to new

and

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changes.

However

,

young

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the young

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are ready to search for new things and opportunities. In a nutshell, travelling is the most popular activity nowadays since now there are many chances for travelling.Some

people

could argue that

traveling

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travelling

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is not

good

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a good

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option for youngsters.

However

, The advantages of travelling abroad outweigh

it's

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its

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drawbacks. Enhancement of wide horizon, enlarging their scope of knowledge, improvement of foreign languages

skills

and obtaining braveness for new things

are

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one of

benefits

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the benefits

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for

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travel for youth.