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Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school . To what extend do you agree of disagree ?

#teenagers #exams #school #life
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 all schools
such
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,the purpose of holding
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 on a regular basis is to release
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knowledgeable people to the world .On
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top of that,I agree that they must have test systems
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 a repeat basis. The
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best way
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 to prove that they understood what they learned about each
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through
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 evaluation .The
exams
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 as
an
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exams
.
Furthermore
,when pupils are experienced with the tests generally become
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a
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accurate target
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achievers
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achievers
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 example,The research done by The University of Colombo
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information who
who
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successfully completed their degree as well as
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 level of
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 position.From 80% of
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proportion
 already achieved their life goals .
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career ,
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vehicle
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 house Hense ,students who have faced
exams
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about
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how to focus on their targets.
On the other hand
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student work and study under pressure due to they have to face their
exams
 and have to prepare for the
exams
.
Therefore
 the students who had faced their
exams
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practiced
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 stressful
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environment
environments
enviorenment
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environments
.
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,
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I
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last
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under pressure
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 due they had never met that kind of
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stressful environment. In conclusion,for young pupils
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have
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early practice and training
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 every situation not even
exams
 they will face their problems without
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.They know how to find the solutions to every problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rigorous
  • work ethic
  • disciplined approach
  • invaluable
  • higher education
  • continuous feedback loop
  • academic weaknesses
  • life skills
  • time management
  • stress management
  • over-assessment
  • stress and anxiety
  • practical skills
  • academic evaluation
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