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More and more people no longer read newspapers. They get news about the world through the Internet. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

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Many
people
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 read the
news
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 daily to discover important occurrences,
such
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 as the global economy, healthcare, weather and many others. The
Internet
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 is very powerful today as the major source of
information
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 centres. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss how easy to access
information
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 on the
Internet
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 and the rise of digital
news
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 in social
media
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.
First
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 of all,
people
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 can easily access the
news
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 using their personal devices,
for example
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, mobile phones or tablets which can access through the web browser or applications at any time. Because the technology is more affordable,
people
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 use it as their communication and companion device daily.
News
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 agencies are increasingly digitising their content for better reachability;
therefore
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, the usage of social
media
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 has increased to publish the
news
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. Since the production cost for digital
news
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 is relatively cheaper,
this
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 will become a game changer in the long run. The more
news
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 is available on the
internet
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, the more
people
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 will save the cost and time to get the
information
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.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 still prefer to stick with the newspaper in either paper or digital format. One of the reasons is the fake
news
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 and
information
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 which are not verified by any authorities or actual
news
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 agencies.
Although
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 freedom of speech is supported on the
internet
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, that can mislead some
people
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 who easily trust the
information
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 on the
internet
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. Unless the moderation of the
internet
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 is possible, some communities will still publish fake
news
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 in order to gain traction, including advertisements, number of views or users. The smaller the number of
people
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 reading the paper-based newspaper, the more publishers will push
further
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 on digital
news
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. In conclusion, more
people
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 will not read the newspaper with the rise of social
media
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 and other forms of digital
news
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. The advantages of getting a wide range of
news
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 easily outweigh the rise of fake
news
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 on social
media
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,
thus
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 I think the
Internet
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 is the future.
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