Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

Protecting
animals
is one of the most important problems that many countries face.
However
, whether or not to stop the
use
of
animals
in testing new
drugs
or other products is a controversial issue. In my opinion, we should protect endangered wild
animals
and can
use
some not endangered
animals
to
test
new
drugs
. It is obvious that using
animals
to
test
new
drugs
is a necessary and very important option. That means many
drugs
need to be tested before it used by humans. As
animals
have lots of parts of the
the
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body like humans
so that
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using
animals
to
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evaluation is the best way. Scientists can get reports and data from the analysis and address the poison. After testing,
people
believe that
drugs
are safe and can be used for all
people
.
For example
, during covid-19
throughout
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all over the world, scientist
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to
test
vaccines, after testing, all
people
can
use
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to protect covid.
Therefore
,
animals
are very useful for
human
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, especially for the research of new
drugs
.
Otherwise
, some
people
think that using
animals
to
test
new
drugs
is very terrible for
animals
. That means during testing,
animals
will feel pain since scientists
use
incorrect items. And
scientist
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change the items and adjust the
drugs
when they get the data from testing. At the same time, the
animals
may be died because of pain or over
drugs
.
Moreover
, some products
such
as clothing are
also
made from the fur of
animals
. It causes some
kind
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of
animals
close to distinct by hunting. In conclusion, nowadays,
although
we cannot avoid using
animals
to
test
new
drugs
,
but
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we can try our best to reduce the pain for
animals
.
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animal's life is a positive thing for us.
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