Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Protecting
animals
is one of the most important problems that many countries face. However
, whether or not to stop the use
of animals
in testing new drugs
or other products is a controversial issue. In my opinion, we should protect endangered wild animals
and can use
some not endangered animals
to test
new drugs
.
It is obvious that using animals
to test
new drugs
is a necessary and very important option. That means many drugs
need to be tested before it used by humans. As animals
have lots of parts of the the
body like humans Remove the redundancy
apply
so that
using Correct word choice
apply
animals
to
evaluation is the best way. Scientists can get reports and data from the analysis and address the poison. After testing, Change preposition
for
people
believe that drugs
are safe and can be used for all people
. For example
, during covid-19 throughout
all over the world, scientist Change preposition
apply
use
writes mice and Wrong verb form
used
rebits
to Correct your spelling
rebuts
test
vaccines, after testing, all people
can use
Add an article
a vaccine
the vaccine
vaccine
to protect covid. Fix the agreement mistake
vaccines
Therefore
, animals
are very useful for human
, especially for the research of new Fix the agreement mistake
humans
drugs
.
Otherwise
, some people
think that using animals
to test
new drugs
is very terrible for animals
. That means during testing, animals
will feel pain since scientists use
incorrect items. And scientist
change the items and adjust the Fix the agreement mistake
Scientists
drugs
when they get the data from testing. At the same time, the animals
may be died because of pain or over drugs
. Moreover
, some products such
as clothing are also
made from the fur of animals
. It causes some kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
animals
close to distinct by hunting.
In conclusion, nowadays, although
we cannot avoid using animals
to test
new drugs
, but
we can try our best to reduce the pain for Remove the conjunction
apply
animals
. Protect
animal's life is a positive thing for us.Wrong verb form
Protecting
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