Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

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Protecting
animals
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is one of the most important problems that many countries face.
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, whether or not to stop the
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of
animals
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in testing new
drugs
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or other products is a controversial issue. In my opinion, we should protect endangered wild
animals
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and can
use
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some not endangered
animals
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to
test
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new
drugs
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. It is obvious that using
animals
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to
test
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new
drugs
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is a necessary and very important option. That means many
drugs
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need to be tested before it used by humans. As
animals
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have lots of parts of the
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body like humans
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using
animals
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to
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evaluation is the best way. Scientists can get reports and data from the analysis and address the poison. After testing,
people
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believe that
drugs
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are safe and can be used for all
people
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.
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, during covid-19
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all over the world, scientist
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writes mice and
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to
test
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vaccines, after testing, all
people
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can
use
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vaccine
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vaccines
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to protect covid.
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,
animals
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are very useful for
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humans
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, especially for the research of new
drugs
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.
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, some
people
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think that using
animals
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to
test
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new
drugs
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is very terrible for
animals
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. That means during testing,
animals
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will feel pain since scientists
use
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incorrect items. And
scientist
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Scientists
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change the items and adjust the
drugs
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when they get the data from testing. At the same time, the
animals
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may be died because of pain or over
drugs
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.
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, some products
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as clothing are
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made from the fur of
animals
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. It causes some
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of
animals
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close to distinct by hunting. In conclusion, nowadays,
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we cannot avoid using
animals
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to
test
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new
drugs
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,
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we can try our best to reduce the pain for
animals
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.
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animal's life is a positive thing for us.
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