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Children can learn many things about the world by watching films. What things can they learn? Do all the things they learn are good?

It is generally said that
movies
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 teach
children
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 various concepts and skills. Though I think
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 is true to a great extent, I hardly think all that they learn from those are beneficial. The
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 thing that a child can absorb from cinema is the diverse lifestyles of people across the
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. cinema generally highlights the living pattern of people where they are shot, and
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 ranges from what they eat to how they behave in various social situations.
Children
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 are
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 interested to know the scientific and technological progress, which are commonly portrayed in the flick.
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, the basics of modern technologies like advanced forensic sciences and biotechnology are included in many
movies
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, and
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 gives the
children
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 opportunities to learn related concepts.
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, films enhance the linguistic abilities of
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. Various aspects like accent, vocabulary and specific usage of languages are acquired by
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,
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 when they watch pictures.
Children
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 can
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 get aware of the cultural and geographical features of parts of the
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, like the Sahara or Antarctica from
movies
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. There might be contrasting opinions when the question is asked whether all things
children
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 learn from
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 are good. I feel as a child procures some necessary information about the
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 from
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, he is likely to acquire some unacceptable behaviour or traits from the characters portrayed in the
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.
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, many juvenile delinquents have reported the root cause of their behaviour problems to violent scenes in
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. To conclude, I think though
movies
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 give ample opportunities for
children
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 to learn many things about the
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, I feel that not all that they watch in
movies
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 are good.

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