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Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could be the reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it?

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It is claimed that the rate of physical health in wealthy countries is decreasing;
however
, they experience high-quality healthcare.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons and the solution towards
this
 trend. The main reason for the unpleasant standard of physical health is the fast pace of lifestyle in developed countries,
although
 the quality of healthcare is high. In the modern world, most
people
 are experiencing busy lifestyles, so they prefer to eat pre-prepared
foods
 like fast
foods
. Obviously, the ingredients of these
foods
 include
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high
level
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 of salt and saturated fat which leads to obesity.
In addition
,
people
 most of the time are working and they are acclimatized to the machinery lifestyle.
For example
, most citizens use their own car to arrive at their workplace, they use elevators to reach their offices and they just seat on chairs and work.
This
 type of work
besides
 consuming unhealthy
food
 is harmful to the human body.
As a result
, the quality of physical health falls. There is a significant solution to
this
 problem and that relies mostly on the government.
Firstly
, the government not only can increase the tax on unhealthy
food
 but
also
 is able to fund healthy
food
. In
this
 ,way the price of junk
foods
 will increase
in contrast
 to healthy
food
.
Therefore
,
people
 prefer to have more healthy
food
 rather than fast
food
.
Secondly
, the government should provide low price gyms for their employees. So, the workforce is encouraged to participate in the gym to have physical exercise as a hobby at a lower price. In summary, the new lifestyle of
people
 living in developed countries makes them have not a high standard of a healthy body and
this
 issue can be addressed by the government’s decision.
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