Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?
General health is one of the most important topics that elder
people
should care about. Many doctors around the world advice
elders to practice physical Replace the word
advise
exercises
to improve their health. Some times
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Sometimes
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chronic
diseases
like blood pressure or diabetes prevent people
from that. The governments should play an important role in raising awareness of elder people
to encourage them to do
exercise.
It is known that older Unnecessary verb
apply
people
are high risk to
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of
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chronic
diseases
more
than youth or children because of the weakness of their immune Correct quantifier usage
apply
system
. Those Fix the agreement mistake
systems
diseases
are the main reason Correct pronoun usage
that prevent
prevent
them from doing exercise regularly. Change the form of the verb
preventing
For instance
, diabetic people
should be very careful during practicing
exercise as their blood sugar level Change the spelling
practising
slump
sometimes Fix the agreement mistake
slumps
suddenlly
which may lead to death . Another cause is mental problems . It can be seen that lot of elders suffer from mental disorders because Correct your spelling
suddenly
of
they live alone or their Change preposition
apply
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partner
partener
passed away which Correct your spelling
partner
make
them feel lazy Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
for
doing physical Change preposition
about
exercises
. Rates of elder people
who suffer from mental problems Correct your spelling
increase
icrease
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increase
everyday
. So governments should take Replace the word
every day
her
responsibility to Correct pronoun usage
apply
takle
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tackle
take
this
serious issue.
Prevention is better than cure . When we talk about diseases
people
should be aware that our immune Correct your spelling
system
systeme
is the cornerstone to Correct your spelling
system
fight
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fighting
diseases
that enter our body. That is
the government
role to educate Change noun form
government's
people
through different life stages how
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and how
exercises
have a huge impact on activating our Correct your spelling
immune system
immune-system
. Correct your spelling
immune system
Also
they should establish some free sports Add a comma
,Also
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programmes
programs
programes
that support Correct your spelling
programs
people
practicing
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practising
exercises
. For example
, Egypt
government holds many sports Correct article usage
the Egypt
compititions
with good Correct your spelling
competitions
prizzes
every year to encourage older Correct your spelling
prizes
people
to practice
sport.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
practise
Although
older people
complain from
different Change preposition
about
diseases
, they should do more exercises
to improve their mental health and governments should do their best to save people
life.Change noun form
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