You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. In your letter • tell him/her about the problem with your photos • say which photo you would like him/her to send you • explain why you need this photo.

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Dear Tom, Hope

this

letter finds you in great health and mental peace, and everything's OK

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your end. What're you up to these days? Long time, no see. I haven't seen you since

last

summer. I'm writing to you to ask if you could help me with a particular shot

which

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I've discovered that my lens wasn't clean when I took it. Let me

first

tell you that the beauty of the scene made me forget to clean the lens of my camera. Basically,

this

doesn't only affect the quality of the picture, but

also

made me unable to recognise the place. One more thing I need to add is that I want you to tell me whether you have the shot of the Pyramids from the northern side. I hope you’ll be able to recall

this

photo that we took after we had finished our tour. One

last

thing I want to tell you before I end up my letter is that

although

I've taken a lot of stunning photos,

this

photo is so much important to me because it'll be the cover of the weekly edition of the school's magazine. please let me know if you have

this

picture soon. Take care of yourself, and till I see you, say hi to your beloved family. Yours, Laila Khaled

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

221 words

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