Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extend is this a positive or negative trend?

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Every
country
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develops its
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through importing and exporting and
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will have a good effect on its economy, especially import is important for every
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. In
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essay, it will be considered whether the import is agreed upon or disagreed
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On the one side, all countries import the
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they need from other countries because the soil and air of each place are different, so it is difficult to grow all
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in one
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,
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, every
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imports its needed
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from other countries.
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, my
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mainly imports citrus fruits from South Asia because the air and soil of my
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can not grow these
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, these
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are in high demand in my agrarian, so my
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imports these
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, citrus fruits contain many vitamins for human health.
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imported feed has several health problems because they are stored with some chemicals until they arrive.
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, the amount of
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foodstuff can affect is economy because imported
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are more expensive.
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, if the price of the product in the city where the foods are produced is an average price, that city's exports are at a higher price, on the importing city is forced to buy it. In conclusion, in my opinion, it is important and effective to check the quality of imported foods before they are released for consumption.
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