Some people think that the increasing number of cars is the biggest problem facing cities. Other people believe that there are even more bigger problems Discuss both views and give your opinion
few folks believe that the major issue nationwide urban areas
facing
is the increasing number of cars, while others believe that there are a plethora of others Wrong verb form
face
complicate
things in metro Wrong verb form
complicated
politans
are facing. Correct your spelling
politicians
Although
personal vehicles are one of the debatable topics I believe that safety during that night and the place to build new homes are the major issues
. This
Easy will discuss both views in forthcoming paragraphs.
It is undeniable that cars are the main cause of traffic congestion and large extent pollution in urban areas due to these vehicles ,Furthermore
these Add a comma
,Furthermore
four wheelers
are occupying a large number of parking places which leads to a dearth of space on the streets. Add a hyphen
four-wheelers
For Example
in UK high private transport is a registered area found to be available less parking space and more traffic congestion. Despite the above reasons I believe that other reasons are the most dangerous issues
Another Major complication of the urban areas is Safety during the night time. There are consistent robbery cases during the night , This
situation is more vulnerable where less dense dwellings are located. In Addition
to ,above it is very hard to find a place to build one new house,
if you find eighter it is prohibitively expensive or the area is primitively developed. Remove the comma
apply
For Example
in London near downtown finding an empty place to construct a house is next
to impossible.
In conclusion, cars are one of the major issues
of current issues
in cities, despite ,this
the safety during the late evenings and open spaces are the prominent problems.Submitted by kadem.naresh286 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
