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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to Orr work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays
Nowadys
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Nowadays
, many
people
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 try to learn
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other
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in addition
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 to their mother
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tongue
tounge
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tongue
. Some think that travel and work are the two acceptable
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reason
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reasons
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 for
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understanding
understading
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understanding
 a new language and others believe that there are several different
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reason
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 for it. I agree with
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 viewpoint that
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multiple
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multiple
 benefits and motivations
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for knowing different
people
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's
languages
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. On the one hand,
traveling
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 and working in abroad can be considered
as
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a
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 main only
reason
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 for
people
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 who are interested in finding
job
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a job
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 or
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 a journey.
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, they can not
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understand
 any other view for learning a foreign language.
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, having
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an easy
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 connection and
basic
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a basic
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 ability for talking when they are
in
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abroad can be enough for them.
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, the vast majority of typical tourists try to obtain premier level
skill
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skills
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 about
countries
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the countries
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 which they are going to visit.
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, there
are
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 a lot of various
motive
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motives
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 that can be considered as a significant
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reason
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reasons
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 to learn other
languages
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such
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 as cultural, educational, economical and political reasons.
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, language is
main
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 port to make
a
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cohorent
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coherent
 communication between two communities.
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, two countries that are located in their
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,
such
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 as Iran and Turkey, with the help of cultural information that can be
rieched
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reached
 by learning each other
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 can have a better political and
economical
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 connection. I believe that the most important
reason
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 for learning foreign
languages
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 is that humans relationship will be more friendly and many
type
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types
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 of
discriminations
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discrimination
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 will significantly decrease. In conclusion,
people
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 worldwide are gradually getting closer
as
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 different aspects because they could find many methods and
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reason
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reasons
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 to know each other
languages
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. So,
i
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 think a
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beautiful
beuatiful
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beautiful
 world in
piece
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the piece
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 can be
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attained
atained
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maintained
 with the help of more verbal communication between different
people
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.

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