People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that many
people
around the world provoke their own sickness. Obviously, there are many reasons for this
, such
as unhygienic food
, unscheduled way of life, uncontrolled consume
of alcohol and smoking cigarettes, so they should pay more for health care. Personally, I don’t agree with Replace the word
consumption
this
point of view, as these people
have to buy the necessary drugs if they want to live and not everyone has this
possibility. This
essay will extensively explain the reasons to support my opinion based on Add a hyphen
real-life
real life
examples.
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real-life
To begin
with, an increasing number of people
indulge in eating fast food
, drinking and refrain from active
lifestyle and eventually become obese, have heart issues and diseases like diabetes. Add an article
an active
Consequently
, those adults are repeat visitors to healthcare institutions. For this
reason, rather than making the pay high fitness premiums, we should encourage them joining to the gym, yoga or Zumba classes, to explain them
the importance of healthy Change preposition
to them
food
etc. One
recent research indicates that a great number of folks don’t really care about eating healthy food
they prefer spending their money on junk food
. This
clearly shows that if the problem continuous
without management, so you can forget about Replace the word
continues
healthy
lifestyle. Correct article usage
a healthy
Thus
, it must be concluded that first
of all, healthcare is a vital
important thing.
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vitally
In addition
to this
, the inner self will be satisfactory only when people
’s external side invest
the best items Correct subject-verb agreement
invests
to
mind and stomach. Change preposition
in
For instance
, we can’t compare two persons’ situations, when one
of them eats only fresh food
and opposite other one
eats unclean food
every day. The supplied example makes it clear that the second
person will pay more for this
health respectively. The link between them is thus
clear.
In a nutshell, after analyzing the above. It can be concluded that each person is responsible for their own health and should take care about
it. Change preposition
of
Thereafter
, rather than feel apathy about diets and unhealthy lifestyle
, many Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
people
are suffering from their complexes. It is my “Tinkerbelle’s hope” that one day
long-waited hero will come and become treat illnesses.Add a hyphen
one-day
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