People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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, unscheduled way of life, uncontrolled Use synonyms
consume
of alcohol and smoking cigarettes, so they should pay more for health care. Personally, I don’t agree with Replace the word
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this
point of view, as these Linking Words
people
have to buy the necessary drugs if they want to live and not everyone has Use synonyms
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essay will extensively explain the reasons to support my opinion based on Linking Words
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real-life
real life
examples.
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To begin
with, an increasing number of Linking Words
people
indulge in eating fast Use synonyms
food
, drinking and refrain from Use synonyms
active
lifestyle and eventually become obese, have heart issues and diseases like diabetes. Add an article
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Consequently
, those adults are repeat visitors to healthcare institutions. For Linking Words
this
reason, rather than making the pay high fitness premiums, we should encourage them joining to the gym, yoga or Zumba classes, to explain Linking Words
them
the importance of healthy Change preposition
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food
etc. Use synonyms
One
recent research indicates that a great number of folks don’t really care about eating healthy Use synonyms
food
they prefer spending their money on junk Use synonyms
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. Use synonyms
This
clearly shows that if the problem Linking Words
continuous
without management, so you can forget about Replace the word
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healthy
lifestyle. Correct article usage
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, it must be concluded that Linking Words
first
of all, healthcare is a Linking Words
vital
important thing.
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vitally
In addition
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this
, the inner self will be satisfactory only when Linking Words
people
’s external side Use synonyms
invest
the best items Correct subject-verb agreement
invests
to
mind and stomach. Change preposition
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For instance
, we can’t compare two persons’ situations, when Linking Words
one
of them eats only fresh Use synonyms
food
and opposite other Use synonyms
one
eats unclean Use synonyms
food
every day. The supplied example makes it clear that the Use synonyms
second
person will pay more for Linking Words
this
health respectively. The link between them is Linking Words
thus
clear.
In a nutshell, after analyzing the above. It can be concluded that each person is responsible for their own health and should take care Linking Words
about
it. Change preposition
of
Thereafter
, rather than feel apathy about diets and unhealthy Linking Words
lifestyle
, many Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
people
are suffering from their complexes. It is my “Tinkerbelle’s hope” that Use synonyms
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one day
long-waited hero will come and become treat illnesses.Add a hyphen
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