You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present

Dear I am very excited to read your letter but I would like to reply to the invitation because I need a detailed plan. big thanks to you. You have invited me to come to your plan. I am so happy when I read your letter and I will to comin' there one day.
However
, your plan is very interesting to me because
this
is very special in my life. As I wrote, I need details before coming and what dress code we want to use. You have invited me on Sunday, 18 April 2024 at night.
In addition
, I will be there on time if I don't have a job at the same time. may god bless you and give you a lot of income later. I want to know which singer or band will perform at your exhibition.
Therefore
, we hope your agenda will be a success and will be way the best for the future. Wish you all the best. Thanks for your attention and apologize I can not wait forward, I need your reply soon Faithfully Ansory
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to properly address the recipient at the beginning of the letter. Starting with something like 'Dear [Organiser's Name],' would be more appropriate.
suitable writing tone
Focus on maintaining a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid using overly casual language such as 'comin'' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.
complete response
Make sure to include all requested details in your letters, such as specific questions about the event. For example, you should ask about the type of art on display and whether any artists will be present.
coherence and cohesion
The closing statement shows genuine interest and excitement about the event, which adds a positive and enthusiastic tone.
suitable writing tone
The letter expresses gratitude and excitement effectively, which is key in maintaining a positive tone.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • invitation
  • art exhibition
  • organizer
  • details
  • display
  • paintings
  • sculptures
  • mixed media
  • section
  • gallery
  • present
  • artists
  • interactions
  • autographs
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