A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay wit him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation *Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit

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Dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you well and good in health. I am thankful to you to invite me to your home in Canada on the occasion of your birthday in my upcoming summer holidays. I would like to tell you that my family made a plan to visit our countryside house on

this

vacation and they want that I will join them during their trip. Because it has been a long

time

since I visited my grandparent's home.

Therefore

, I ought to go with my parents to my village and spend my free

time

. As you know that I am excited to visit Canada for a long

time

hence

, I already took permission from my father to come here for my

year summer vacation. Hopefully, very soon we will meet again and get an opportunity to spend quality

time

together. I hope you will understand my situation. See you soon. Yours lovingly

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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156 words

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