Is the radio the best way to get news, or is TV better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#radio #news #tv #purpose

Having to know what is going on around the city, country and the world is very important for each and

everyone

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of us. There can be various sources of

news

such

radio

, newspapers etc. In my opinion, both

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sources of

news

can be equally helpful. As we know radios were invented before

so that

news

could be spread amongst most

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the

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people

. Radios are portable and

hence

it is easy to carry them around.

For example

, one can carry them while travelling.

Furthermore

, they

also

come at a relatively cheaper rate which makes them affordable to the majority of

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society.

However

, it could be a little challenging for

people

who have disabilities in listening.

For instance

, if there is any warning to be issued for an approaching cyclone, it would not be possible to communicate it to the

people

who need

hearing

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aid. In

such

cases,

can be a good source of

the

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news

People

who find it difficult to hear can read the

news

being displayed on the

screens.

On the other hand

is more expensive than

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radio

and

hence

less number of

people

would be able to afford it.

Moreover

, it is not small enough to be carried around wherever we go.

Besides

, at times some

news

have

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a serious impact on

the

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people

when they see it rather than hear it. To conclude, both sources of

news

are equally useful. If we are travelling to some place, we can prefer the

radio

as it is portable and can help us to be aware of the

news

at all times. We can prefer a

whenever possible as humans tend to remember what they see and has a better impact on them.

People

who need a hearing aid can prefer

as it would be easy for them to understand the

news

whereas,

people

who have

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weak eyesight can prefer using a

radio

. Technology can be a boon if used appropriately.

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