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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview

#restaurant #job #•explain #•describe #suitability #area #work #•say #interview
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the recent job posting for Indian
Chef
, that you have advertised on your website. I have recently moved to Canada and looking for a job in a restaurant as a
Chef
. Before, migrating here I was working as a head
chef
 in one of the renowned food chain restaurants Yellow Chilly, in the Capital city. I have an expertise of over 3 years in Asian cuisine, especially Indian dishes. I completed my training under the world-famous Indian
Chef
 Mr Vikas Khanna.
Also
, I am capable of handling multiple cuisines at a given point in time. I have received recognition and appreciation for my work from many famous chefs in the country.
Furthermore
, I have a rich knowledge of spices and flavours.
Besides
, I am a quick learner, who can adapt the new techniques in a short span of time. I am an immediate joiner and available all the days of the week . I am available for the interview on Monday, September 23rd, at 10:00 am in the morning. I hope you will consider my application. I look forward to contributing my learnings and satisfying the taste buds of precious customers with our scrumptious food. Yours Faithfully, JK
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coherence cohesion
Try to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea energetically to enhance readability.
task achievement
Double-check for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasings to make your letter flawless.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a logical structure and flows smoothly from one point to the next.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and courteous.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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