Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about an interesting website that you have found recently. In your letter, say how you found it how it can help how you use it

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Dear Kevin, Hope you are doing well. I’m writing

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to tell you that I have found an interesting website which you might absolutely love. I just found it while checking some web links shared by my brother’s university recently. The link to the website is “www.aviatorsimu.com”.

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amazing website is for beginners in Aviation Engineering and for training pilots. It provides many flight simulators for different commercial aircraft in different airports. So I hope

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would be beneficial for both of us since we are planning to start Aircraft Pilot Program

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year. As to prepare for the program, I have already started to learn about the subjects and started to use

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wonderful online simulator available on the web. With its simulators for different air crafts, we can get real-time experience with the controls of the system. So I believe

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would be a nice beginning for our courses and will provide us with a head starts over others. So I want you to check it and start studying. Hope to meet you

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year at the university. Regards, Alex

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about an interesting website that you have found recently. In your letter, say how you found it how it can help how you use it

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Computers and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpiad work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.

shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that has been scientifically to be proven detrimental people's health. to what extent do you agree or disagree

You travelled on plane some days back lost your bag. Though you field your claim to Lost and Found department you have not received your bag. In your letter - write the details of incident - inquire the status of your lost bag to airline - tell what you want if the bag is not found