Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

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It is considered by some that
parents
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should teach their
children
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about the ways to be good and civilised members of
society
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while others hold the opinion that these values should be taught by the
school
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.
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, in my opinion, I believe that
parents
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and
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both are equally important to instil moral values, among
children
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, to be a good
citizen
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. On one hand,
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are the
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teachers, and home is the
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school
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where
children
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learn about life lessons. Educating
children
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about love, empathy, kindness, and socially acceptable behaviour is a must at home.
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,
children
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should be taught to help the needy members of the community because
parents
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know their
children
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well.
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, they can teach their kids about social responsibilities effectively, which should not be ignored.
On the other hand
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,
school
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is the place where
children
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are taught
skills
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various subjects that help
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them to
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be self-reliant. When
children
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gain education and various
skills
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in
school
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, it will help them in future to become self-dependent.
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will
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empower them to contribute towards
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society
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the society
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using their
skills
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, educated
children
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may help to teach
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alphabets
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and help to read and write, to illiterate members of
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society
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.
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, in my opinion,
children
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should be taught to be socially responsible by
parents
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as well as at
school
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. When
children
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get
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education of
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, love, and kindness they can grow to become a helpful
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of
society
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. In conclusion, the most effective method to help
children
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to become morally and socially responsible
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of
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apply
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society
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is to teach them at home and
also
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at
school
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • role models
  • moral values
  • social norms
  • structured environment
  • cooperation
  • respect
  • communal responsibilities
  • decision-making
  • societal integration
  • consistent messages
  • cultural expectations
  • complementary roles
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