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Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

#obesity #epidemic
Nowadays, one of the global issues that young and elderly people face is
obesity
. It may be either due to
time
 spent sitting in front of a net or following a diet. Apart from the causes of ,
obesity
 it has adverse effects on the community
that is
 suffering from it. To solve
this
 issue, suggested limiting screen
time
 and avoiding junk food.
First
 of all, keep track of the
time
, that children spend watching TV. offspring do not know the
time
, which should be spent watching television, and because of
this
parents
 have to restrict their
time
, spent in front of the screen.
Also
,
parents
 should try to spend more
time
 outside with their children, as
isit
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it
 beneficial for both sides. Walking on a regular basis will keep fit in both age groups,
however
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 at the same ,term
parents
 should monitor the child's nutrition.
Last
 but not the least, limit unhealthy foods in the household. If
parents
 bring unhealthy foods into the household, children may be more likely to eat them. Even though, we all know about the negative impact of those foods, we could not avoid them because of their lip-smacking taste and delicious appearance. The truth behind
that is
, used several aromas and artificial appearances, will malfunction our hormones and, probably, lead to
obesity
. Avoiding
this
 kind of product will keep people slim enough. In conclusion, restricting screen
time
 and avoiding unhealthy food, will probably keep people fit. In my ,opinion the best way to reduce
obesity
 in the world, is to follow a healthy diet from childhood. Because what diet scions follow from the beginning would have an impact on their health in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • epidemic
  • balanced diet
  • nutritional labeling
  • public recreational spaces
  • community sports programs
  • food advertising regulations
  • medical professionals
  • workplace wellness programs
  • mental health support
  • sugary drinks tax
  • consumer choices
  • affordable and accessible
  • health organizations
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