Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at school and at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?
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children
to study knowledge. So that
some people think that Correct word choice
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children
should be allowed to watch TV
both at school and at home
. My view is that it good for children
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but not at Correct your spelling
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home
.
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, it is obvious that TV
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education
. This
is because teachers can play a lot of different types of education
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with images and videos.
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For example
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play
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students
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whole class, some Change preposition
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students
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students
to keep focusing the whole class.
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children
. So young kids cannot learn anything from that.
In summary, I agree that teacher
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to
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However
, children
should not keep watching TV
at home
because they cannot get knowledge from it.Submitted by yingfengli630 on
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