discuss about different type of careers and give your opinion

The combination of the unknown, the science, the knowledge and the social interactions makes medicine the most appealing subject to me. I’ve always been inspired to overcome any challenges or obstacles, and medicine provides the best cocktail of challenges and knowledge to conquer any bump along the
way
. To start
this
medical journey, I could go
way
back to the time I was a young girl and felt the joy of helping others. My early work as a volunteer consisted of helping the needy in a Portuguese program called Bank Food.
This
early volunteer work paved the initial bricks to a long road ahead. Completing my school studies in Catholic scholarity and public scholarity proved that I could endure challenging environments. Both types of scholarity are hugely different from where I come, the challenges of both made me able to adapt to any certain type of environment the world throws at me. After completing my national studies, I decided to go full ahead into an adventure, the Czech Republic.
This
was a difficult decision to make, family and friends were all in Portugal, but
nevertheless
, I decided to go ahead and proceed with the Medical Course in Masaryk University of Brno, Czech Republic. The opportunity to be in the Centre of Europe, in an English-taught university was exactly what I wanted.
This
medical training was based on two main hospitals: Faculty Hospital of Brno and St. Anne’s University Hospital Brno. For my
last
year of studies, I organized in
such
a
way
that my internship would be done in the Hospital of Cascais in Portugal. Throughout
this
whole year, I had the opportunity to learn in a different
way
than I was ever before; tutorship by masters of their craft made me realize more than ever
this
was exactly what I wanted. The opportunity to participate in surgeries, emergencies and
day
to
day
procedures is something I will value for the rest of my life. The 27th of April was a
day
to remember, the
day
I graduated from my Master’s degree in General Medicine. After some well-deserved rest, I started to weigh my options in life: stay at home or go for another adventure. The decision was an easy one; every part of me wanted another experience, and, with a little help from my friends, Ireland was the country that felt ideal. A stunningly beautiful, English-speaking, music-loving country felt right.
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