You have borrowed something from you friend, and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.

#friend #product

Dear Pooja, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the damage to the rear side of the

car

mirror. I know your dad gifted you

this

car

on your birthday, and it’s so special for you. I am sorry for damaging your vehicle.

This

incident happened

last

week when I was travelling for work during rush hour. There was a lot of traffic,and a vehicle behind me just cut your

car

and hit the rear side of the mirror. There is no other structural damage to the

car

, only the mirror was shattered into pieces. I have already scheduled an appointment

this

weekend to fix it by an authorized dealer itself,

this

will ensure original parts are replaced by the manufacturer. I should get the

car

the same day and return to you by evening. I am planning to pay the total amount of

this

repair, and I would like to apologize to you for

this

accident. Best Regards, tina

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7 paragraphs

162 words

9.00

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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