As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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the
increasing number of cars. Some people think that Change preposition
to the
government
should take the
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responsibility
responsibilty
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responsibility
to
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the road
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however
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other people think that Correct your spelling
however
drivers
should pay for the cost. My view is that government
should pay for the road
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systems
sytems
and the Correct your spelling
systems
drivers
should pay for the Correct your spelling
maintenance
maintiance
.
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official
offical
department has enough money to build a Correct your spelling
official
road
system all over the country
. This
is because the government
get taxes from citizens and some other business and the government
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the right
country
. Moreover
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an individual
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individuals
government
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rest
road
systems
.
On the other hand
, drivers
have no responsibility to cover the costs. Drivers
already pay a lot of different taxes before they used the road
. For example
, drivers
need to pay a Correct your spelling
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tansfer
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petrol
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drivers
should not spent
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a new
the new
road
.
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roads
government
need to pay all the money to build a good
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a good road system
good road systems
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systems
over the country
. However
, drivers
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no duty to cover the costs as they Change the verb form
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already
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maintenance
maintance
fees.
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