The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The charts illustrate the installation of speed-camera in the respective years and the statistic of road traffic

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and

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ratio directly affected within these years in the city of Melbourne.

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the bar chart represents the figure

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speed cameras gradually raised within four years. In 2002 and 2003, there were only 30 to

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cameras in the city but it became double in 2004. A sudden jump up within the next year and reached around 150 in numbers. In the second chart, lines illustrate the initial rate of road traffic

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and the sum of

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due to

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accidents. Accidents remained at 3 per

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which enhanced in the year 2004 by 1 per

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. The figure

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remained static

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. A sharp increment in

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was observed between the

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2004 and 2005, which reached around 2 per

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declined to 1 per

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till the end of 2005.