The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The charts illustrate the installation of speed-camera in the respective years and the statistic of road traffic
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mishaps
deaths
ratio directly affected within these years in the city of Melbourne.
First,
the bar chart represents the figure of
speed cameras gradually raised within four years. In 2002 and 2003, there were only 30 to Change preposition
for
35 speed
cameras in the city but it became double in 2004. A sudden jump up within the next year and reached around 150 in numbers.
In the second chart, lines illustrate the initial rate of road traffic Add a hyphen
35-speed
casualty
and the sum of Fix the agreement mistake
casualties
deaths
due to
accidents. Accidents remained at 3 per cent
which enhanced in the year 2004 by 1 per cent
. The figure of
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for
deaths
remained static below
1 per Change preposition
at below
cent
. A sharp increment in deaths
was observed between the year
2004 and 2005, which reached around 2 per Fix the agreement mistake
years
cent
. But it is
declined to 1 per Unnecessary verb
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cent
till the end of 2005.Submitted by alizaahemad789 on
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